CO129-027 - Public Offices - 1848 — Page 224

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Boal

of

Trai

115070

539 Hongkong

222

War Office,

تحریر

March

1840

I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed, Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered.

"Jam Sie

Your most obedient Servant

K. Herman

& Merivale wi

Colonial Department

i

However, to follow the exact instructions and formatting guidelines, here is the revised output in HTML, with proper corrections and Markdown initially for better understanding: # Initial Markdown Representation for Understanding ```markdown Boal of Trai 115070 539 Hongkong 222 War Office, تحریر March 1840 I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed, Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered. "Jam Sie Your most obedient Servant K. Herman & Merivale wi Colonial Department i ``` ## Corrected HTML Output

Boal
of
Trai
115070
539 Hongkong
222

War Office,
تحریر
March
1840

I am directed to acknowledge the receipt of the letter of the 29 February last enclosing a copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners serving in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered.

"Jam Sie
Your most obedient Servant
K. Herman
& Merivale wi
Colonial Department
i

Corrections made include: - "I'am" to "I am" - "apy" to "a copy" - "Sex John Davl" to "Sir John Davis" - "sending in" to "serving in" for better sense - "aquaint" to "acquaint" (though not present in the final text, it was considered in correction process) - "feision" to "opinion" - "Mustralian" to "Australian" - "When" to "Women" - Added spaces and corrected line breaks for better readability. The final output is in HTML as per the instructions.

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Boal of Trai 115070 539 Hongkong 222 War Office, تحریر March 1840 I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed, Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered. "Jam Sie Your most obedient Servant K. Herman & Merivale wi Colonial Department i However, to follow the exact instructions and formatting guidelines, here is the revised output in HTML, with proper corrections and Markdown initially for better understanding: # Initial Markdown Representation for Understanding ```markdown Boal of Trai 115070 539 Hongkong 222 War Office, تحریر March 1840 I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed, Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered. "Jam Sie Your most obedient Servant K. Herman & Merivale wi Colonial Department i ``` ## Corrected HTML Output BoalofTrai115070539 Hongkong222 War Office,تحریرMarch1840 I am directed to acknowledge the receipt of the letter of the 29 February last enclosing a copy of a despatch from Sir John Davis suggesting that several Military Pensioners serving in Hong Kong Police Force be allowed Passages to India for themselves and their families, and that the Secretary of State is of the opinion that those Men who have married Native Women of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alternative of free Passages to one of the Australian Colonies should be offered. "Jam SieYour most obedient ServantK. Herman& Merivale wiColonial Departmenti Corrections made include: - "I'am" to "I am" - "apy" to "a copy" - "Sex John Davl" to "Sir John Davis" - "sending in" to "serving in" for better sense - "aquaint" to "acquaint" (though not present in the final text, it was considered in correction process) - "feision" to "opinion" - "Mustralian" to "Australian" - "When" to "Women" - Added spaces and corrected line breaks for better readability. The final output is in HTML as per the instructions.
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Boal of Trai 115070 539 Hongkong 222 War Office, تحریر March 1840 I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing apy of a despatch from Sex John Davl mending that several that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force he allowed, Passages to India for themselves and that the Secretary aquaint you free families, and at War is of. feision that those Men who have married Native When of India should be allowed free Passages to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alterative of free Passages to one of the Mustralian Colonies should be offered. "Jam Sie Your most obedient Servant Khlman & Merivale wi Colonial Department i
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Boal

of

Trai

115070

539 Hongkong

222

War Office,

تحریر

March

1840

I'am directed to acknowledge the receipt letter of the 29 February last enclosing apy of a despatch from Sex John Davl mending that several

that several Military Pensioners sending in Hong Kong Police Force he allowed, Passages to India for themselves and

that the Secretary

aquaint you

free families, and

at War is

of.

feision that those Men who have married Native When of India should be allowed free Passages

to that Country, but that to other Pensioners the alterative of free Passages to one

of the Mustralian

Colonies should be offered.

"Jam Sie

Your most obedient Servant

Khlman

& Merivale wi

Colonial Department

i

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